Amazing Shree!! Wonderful loved it! so where to start from.. umm.. Arakshi.. this duo rocks as always!! their convos are superb! They share the same pain.. yet deal with it differently! Both are behind Sik.. for different reasons.. Sak is getting info about what led Arjun to Sik! Jun talked to Sak n then started seeing things differently.. only for a while though! Aisha-Sakshi's convo was nicely written! n Sam heard the last bit of it! so now he's doubting Aisha.. n got a chance for his interrogation! wow.. loved that story part! so smart! he held her onto gunpoint n asked to blurt out the truth! KV.. what shall I say about them.. they are the update stealers.. though the chief is missing.. Sik! I really missed him in this update! :P :D ok..back to KV.. superb! amazing! one thing I didn't get is "From the drug lord 'R' to a simple drug peddler..." "R" who is he?? Samrat wanted the RR duo to marry his sisters! n KV didn't like that fact! a love triangle.. no actually I need to count how many angles! hehe! :P RR duo.. their footage was interesting! they are besties n will always remain the same! do continu soon p.s. - are you not going to continu the old Enigma?? It was almost on the verge of completion!!
Woohooo... thank you so much for that LOOONNNGGG comment! I am glad you loved Arakshi so much! Haha! Missing Sik... let's say he makes an appearance in the next chappy :) *grinning* Ah, KV are my weak point... always
"R" will be revealed in the next chapter! Haha Samrat was teasing the RR duo! He didn't mean it... lol!
Well the previous Enigma was in a sort of mess... so unless I can clear it can I start the next part... :)
Here you begin Enigma and trust me the tittle is just apt. Loads going on in foreground and background and hats off to you my girl for keeping everything in a loop. I for many a times gets confused in my loops that I am falling for your work. KV is mysterious. The doubts that I had was in a way sorting out in the progress of the chapter. So both Sakshi and Aisha are helping out KV, but they already have a mole to handle too! thats good. And Sam-Aisha talk and the cliffhanger makes me wait for it eagerly. And trust me, I am going to tag on this enigma from now on!
Awesome as usual dear..but this time it was more! :P Arakshi rock as always.. a fiery convo.. beautifully written.. loved the part where Sakshi's heart n Verma tried to knock sense in her! but she still lied.. interesting.. but what will happen when Arjun comes to know that she was lying?? he hates lies doesn't he?? ;) it's hell intriguing!!
SaSha.. oh.. another fiery convo.. Aisha too suffered something like Sakshi right? *the pressure cooker is about to blast..* ~~~ ** blast ** ~~~ Sam made the biggest mistake of his life :'(
yay.. my sik.. *something hits me* **but it doesn't stop me from writing further! hehe!!** Sik-Ingrov.. superb part! Ingrov started feeling for him.. hmm.. interesting! ok.. the main point.. a sports coach n a drug lord.. konnection to bahot zabardust hai.. n teacher.. this makes it more intriguing! he could relax till the death of Arjun.. he knows the future too well !! haha!!
KV.. my most favt duo!! n they are into action again.. Arjun's records aren't interesting.. whoa!! normal great cop.. perfect oxymoron for Arjun!! too good! Kappy didn't tell Verma about the real info.. why?? n this literally gave me a heart attack.. Arjun leaked the info about Samrat.. WT***??!! 'R' is revealed now.. oh no.. I'm heart broken.. :'( *sniff* *sniff* do continu soon
Amazing chappy dear loved it as always! Siki was the show stealer yet again! Ingrov was at his house n she liked to do work for him, she felt like a woman! cleaning his house.. n she was into trouble! She dropped into the room where the evidences of his weakness were present! He punished her for no mistake of hers! :'( "Fear could only be felt when a person was alive. That's the best about fear." Loved these lines! Also, "Today there was no difference between them." I love the way you portray the grey shade of the characters! Showing good n bad is easy but the grey thing is not that easy! You do it perfectly! I love n hate the character at the same time! Arakshi convo was nice! she made him smile n laugh! They kissed! oh my!! n then he felt guilty! he never loved her n yet he was ready to make love! He denied the fact that he had feelings for her!! Arjun always felt guilty about the fact that he was the reason of Samrat's murder! n he posed it to be guilty of Roshni's murder! The human psychology shows the normal personality trait of denial, this is the best example I've ever got! :) SaSha.. finally everything settled between them n he proposed her for marriage! wow! beautiful! all the dreams came crashing down after the blast!! "The unconscious lion.." what will happen when he is back to his senses?? the last line was said by Arjun right?? do continu soon
Read latest updates!! Dammit girl u r killing me. That was a splendid update I really liked the way u r progressing with Sik and Ingrov. Something is very different between them. And that highlights the beauty. Can't wait to read more n more.
Fantastic, amazing creation of some creative minded person. Where can I find the last chapter of this story ? please please please please please reply I really want to know what happened in the end. And what happened to my most favourite couple arakshi ?
awesome update...tfs
ReplyDeleteAmazing Shree!!
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loved it!
so where to start from.. umm..
Arakshi.. this duo rocks as always!! their convos are superb! They share the same pain.. yet deal with it differently! Both are behind Sik.. for different reasons.. Sak is getting info about what led Arjun to Sik! Jun talked to Sak n then started seeing things differently.. only for a while though!
Aisha-Sakshi's convo was nicely written! n Sam heard the last bit of it! so now he's doubting Aisha.. n got a chance for his interrogation! wow.. loved that story part! so smart! he held her onto gunpoint n asked to blurt out the truth!
KV.. what shall I say about them.. they are the update stealers.. though the chief is missing.. Sik! I really missed him in this update! :P :D ok..back to KV.. superb! amazing! one thing I didn't get is "From the drug lord 'R' to a simple drug peddler..." "R" who is he??
Samrat wanted the RR duo to marry his sisters! n KV didn't like that fact! a love triangle.. no actually I need to count how many angles! hehe! :P
RR duo.. their footage was interesting! they are besties n will always remain the same!
do continu soon
p.s. - are you not going to continu the old Enigma?? It was almost on the verge of completion!!
Woohooo... thank you so much for that LOOONNNGGG comment! I am glad you loved Arakshi so much! Haha! Missing Sik... let's say he makes an appearance in the next chappy :) *grinning* Ah, KV are my weak point... always
Delete"R" will be revealed in the next chapter! Haha Samrat was teasing the RR duo! He didn't mean it... lol!
Well the previous Enigma was in a sort of mess... so unless I can clear it can I start the next part... :)
Here you begin Enigma and trust me the tittle is just apt. Loads going on in foreground and background and hats off to you my girl for keeping everything in a loop. I for many a times gets confused in my loops that I am falling for your work.
ReplyDeleteKV is mysterious. The doubts that I had was in a way sorting out in the progress of the chapter. So both Sakshi and Aisha are helping out KV, but they already have a mole to handle too! thats good.
And Sam-Aisha talk and the cliffhanger makes me wait for it eagerly.
And trust me, I am going to tag on this enigma from now on!
Awesome as usual dear..but this time it was more! :P
ReplyDeleteArakshi rock as always.. a fiery convo.. beautifully written.. loved the part where Sakshi's heart n Verma tried to knock sense in her! but she still lied.. interesting.. but what will happen when Arjun comes to know that she was lying?? he hates lies doesn't he?? ;) it's hell intriguing!!
SaSha.. oh.. another fiery convo.. Aisha too suffered something like Sakshi right?
*the pressure cooker is about to blast..*
~~~ ** blast ** ~~~
Sam made the biggest mistake of his life :'(
yay.. my sik.. *something hits me* **but it doesn't stop me from writing further! hehe!!**
Sik-Ingrov.. superb part! Ingrov started feeling for him.. hmm.. interesting!
ok.. the main point.. a sports coach n a drug lord.. konnection to bahot zabardust hai.. n teacher.. this makes it more intriguing! he could relax till the death of Arjun.. he knows the future too well !! haha!!
KV.. my most favt duo!! n they are into action again.. Arjun's records aren't interesting.. whoa!! normal great cop.. perfect oxymoron for Arjun!! too good!
Kappy didn't tell Verma about the real info.. why??
n this literally gave me a heart attack.. Arjun leaked the info about Samrat.. WT***??!!
'R' is revealed now.. oh no.. I'm heart broken.. :'( *sniff* *sniff*
do continu soon
Loads of love!
Amazing chappy dear loved it as always!
ReplyDeleteSiki was the show stealer yet again! Ingrov was at his house n she liked to do work for him, she felt like a woman! cleaning his house.. n she was into trouble! She dropped into the room where the evidences of his weakness were present! He punished her for no mistake of hers! :'(
"Fear could only be felt when a person was alive. That's the best about fear." Loved these lines! Also, "Today there was no difference between them."
I love the way you portray the grey shade of the characters! Showing good n bad is easy but the grey thing is not that easy! You do it perfectly! I love n hate the character at the same time!
Arakshi convo was nice! she made him smile n laugh! They kissed! oh my!! n then he felt guilty! he never loved her n yet he was ready to make love! He denied the fact that he had feelings for her!!
Arjun always felt guilty about the fact that he was the reason of Samrat's murder! n he posed it to be guilty of Roshni's murder! The human psychology shows the normal personality trait of denial, this is the best example I've ever got! :)
SaSha.. finally everything settled between them n he proposed her for marriage! wow! beautiful!
all the dreams came crashing down after the blast!!
"The unconscious lion.." what will happen when he is back to his senses??
the last line was said by Arjun right??
do continu soon
Loads of love,
You know.. ;)
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ReplyDeleteDammit girl u r killing me. That was a splendid update
I really liked the way u r progressing with Sik and Ingrov. Something is very different between them. And that highlights the beauty.
Can't wait to read more n more.
Hey read from beginning till last part
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But story going good
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ReplyDeleteFantastic, amazing creation of some creative minded person. Where can I find the last chapter of this story ? please please please please please reply I really want to know what happened in the end. And what happened to my most favourite couple arakshi ?
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